I would really appreciate some comments on my poetry.
trying out something big and really need some kind of
support from someone, no one thinks I can do it and I
wanna prove everyone wrong. i need your help to get me
on the right track. please help me out. comment on my
stuff with some constructive criticism please. even if
you think its crap, let me know please. kind of counting
on you to let me know if I need to work on it, if it's
good or bad or even if I'm a guaranteed failure.
anyone got some faith in me?
please help me out.
thanks
ElmoFreak








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